Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Skyward Outage

I am continuing to grade student work, but with the Skyward outage, do not know when I will be able to update grades.  Like you, I will be busy with family activities over Thanksgiving, so will try to find a time when my schedule and Skyward availability mesh!

Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Tuesday, November 26, 2013


Announcements and Reminders:
Child's book?
Newsletter?
Fiction and nonfiction
Have a Beautiful Thanksgiving!







Today's Prompt:  
Imagine that you are a stranger (someone you don't know) who has been invited to spend Thanksgiving with your family. Write from that person's point of view about what he or she sees, hears, etc.  



Finish your Thank You!  Hand it in on Kidblog. 
Make sure your name is on it!!!!!
 You may also print a hard copy to deliver to someone.

To post your Thank You's, log in to the Thank You Blog on Kidblog.  The password is [ask me or see the post on Kidblog.]   
Then create a new post with your thank you.  Make it creative, lovely, meaningful!  It can be to someone near or far, living or dead, real or not. 
Make sure your name is on it!!!!!
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If you have extra time, write letters to Santa to benefit the Make-a-Wish Foundation. 


Friday, November 22, 2013


Prompt:   Write to another from the list of prompts in your composition book.



rubric for our school newsletter

Could include a survey 
Could include an interview
Could use a rhetorical question 

At least one paragraph! 
Include background  -- Make it clear what you are talking about!
What, Who, Where, When,  Why, How 
Interesting!   
Title
Author -- Byline 
Edited carefully 


Due November 22 -- today!

Sample:  http://cavewriting2010b1.pbworks.com/w/page/34385746/Caveman-NewsWiki-January-2011

Write for our "school magazine." 
Have you been invited to our newsletter blog on Google?

Then --
Write a creative, lovely, sincere thank you to someone near or far, living or dead,  real or fictional.
To post your Thank You's, log in to the Thank You Blog on Kidblog.  The password is [ask me or see the post on Kidblog.]   Then create a new post with your thank you.  Make it creative, lovely, meaningful!  It can be to someone near or far, living or dead, real or not. 

http://kidblog.org/MsDorseysWriters/

Monday, November 18, 2013

Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Prompt:  Briefly rewrite a classic story from the point of view of the "bad guy/antagonist/villain."  This could be from a fairy tale, legend, myth, etc.

Here is an example:
  
 Snow White from the point of view of the Queen

            I’d been a single woman for far too long when I met Stephan.   Oh, I was known as a great beauty – the fairest of them all (successful careers in acting and modeling) and I’d dated a lot of men, but none of them swept me off my feet  like he did.  After all, he was handsome and kind and King!
  His daughter Snow White – he doted on her – Yes I did feel a little jealous, but I loved the child as a daughter  except she could certainly be irritating
always singing into  wells – you know that echoing sound – grates on the nerves
and when you have a lot of birds gathering around --  you know what birds leave behind
After Stephen died,  I tried to be the best mother I could to little Snow White – didn’t want her growing up a spoiled princess – had her do some chores around the house –
She did grow more and more beautiful with each passing year –
Had huntsman take her for a healthy outing in the woods – apparently when I told him it would be good for her heart – he thought I’d said to cut out her heart – how can a man be so stupid?
she ran away –
It was because I’d provided opportunities for her to clean and cook in the castle that she was able to get a job working for the seven dwarves.
Duh. . . I said "good for her heart,
"not "cut out her heart"!
I knew that men aren’t all that good at grocery shopping, and they never remember to get fruits and vegetables, so I decided to take her some apples which were just ripe. . .
I figured she would still be frightened of me because of the heart misunderstanding, 
so I dressed in a disguise – an old-woman costume from my acting days.

She ate so fast she choked. I tried the Heimlich maneuver. It didn’t work, but when that prince came along and kissed her, she gasped.  I would have too if he’d kissed me --and the piece came loose.


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Priorities:
#1 Child's Book if not completely finished and turned in
#2 Newsletter article -- due Friday
#3 Thank you due next Tuesday
#4 Beginnings of a fictional story and a nonfiction/memoir/personal narrative due December 5.


Some of you are doing GREAT on your newspaper articles!!!!!  I can't wait to see the rest!

To post your Thank You's, log in to the Thank You Blog on Kidblog.  The password is [ask me or see the post on Kidblog.]   Then create a new post with your thank you.  Make it creative, lovely, meaningful!  It can be to someone near or far, living or dead, real or not.