Friday, March 30, 2012

Revision and Editing

Qualities/Traits of an Effective Memoir

  • enough detail
  • sensory detail
  • descriptive words
  • similes and metaphors
  • (emotions)
  • length is not too long and not too short
  • effective titles
  • what else? 

Steps for Revision:
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Sentence Variety Chart.doc 

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